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PostPosted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 11:07 pm 
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jeeven hai kora tum bin.
asha o se hai joda tum bin.
rahe na kat saki to kiya
chalna hai muskil tum bin
sath tum ho to darna kiya ish duniya se,
akele na rahe sake ge ab tum bin.
wada karo tum sath nibhene ka,
verna akele mar bhi na sakege ham tum bin
in ankho me rahegi pyas tumse milne kee
akhri alvida bhi na ho sakegi tum bhi
jao tum bhi rato ki tara,
lakin chain se tum so na sakoge ham bin…………………..by kamal …


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PostPosted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 11:20 pm 
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ache ahsaas laaye ho :) :)

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 10:11 am 
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kamal wrote:
jeeven hai kora tum bin.
asha o se hai joda tum bin.
rahe na kat saki to kiya
chalna hai muskil tum bin
sath tum ho to darna kiya ish duniya se,
akele na rahe sake ge ab tum bin.
wada karo tum sath nibhene ka,
verna akele mar bhi na sakege ham tum bin
in ankho me rahegi pyas tumse milne kee
akhri alvida bhi na ho sakegi tum bhi
jao tum bhi rato ki tara,
lakin chain se tum so na sakoge ham bin…………………..by kamal …


Nice Kamal ji

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 10:56 pm 
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bhut achi likhe h..................
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 6:48 pm 
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kamal wrote:
jeeven hai kora tum bin.
asha o se hai joda tum bin.
rahe na kat saki to kiya
chalna hai muskil tum bin
sath tum ho to darna kiya ish duniya se,
akele na rahe sake ge ab tum bin.
wada karo tum sath nibhene ka,
verna akele mar bhi na sakege ham tum bin
in ankho me rahegi pyas tumse milne kee
akhri alvida bhi na ho sakegi tum bhi
jao tum bhi rato ki tara,
lakin chain se tum so na sakoge ham bin…………………..by kamal …

kya baat ha


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