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***** Apka Beta****** Mera Beta******
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 11:29 am 
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" Mehman, mezban ke pas aaya,
Mezban, mehman ko dekhkar muskraya,
Mehman ne kadve karele jaisa munh banaya,
mezban se bola,
Jab main pahel atta tha,
to apka beta meri, Har aagya puri karta tha,
is bar usne ashbhyata ki sari hadain tod di,
Balkani se patthar markar meri aankh fod di,
kya ab wah bure bachchoun ke sath khelta hai,
Mezban halke se muskraya, or bola,
nahi ab wah bure bachchoun ke sath nahi khelta hai,
balki,
Din Din Bhar Tv Ke samne baith kar,
Sansad ka seedha prasaran dekhta hai, "


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Re: ***** Apka Beta****** Mera Beta******
PostPosted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 10:32 am 
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hmmmm...haasya..lkein gambheer baat..


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Re: ***** Apka Beta****** Mera Beta******
PostPosted: Mon Jan 05, 2009 11:43 pm 
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प्रिय मित्र

तुम्हारी रचना पढ़ी पढ़ कर दिल बहुत खुश हुआ, व्यंग के माध्यम से राजनीती पे अच कटाक्ष किया, ईश्वर आपकी कलम को ताकत बख्शे ऐसी मेरी कामना है .

भारत विकल्प


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Re: ***** Apka Beta****** Mera Beta******
PostPosted: Fri Jan 23, 2009 1:44 am 
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kya bata hai ek dma sahi baat...ab me sochu aaj akl bache hinsak ku hai :)


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