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पाणी.....
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 10:18 am 
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तुला काल रडताना बघुन,
मला त्या पाण्याची खरंच किव आली..
मला त्याला विचारावंस वाटलं,"का रे बाबा,
तुला त्या डोळ्यांमधुन बाहेर पडावंस वाटलंच तरी कसं"??


आणि खळकन् पाणी म्हणालं
मीच जर बाहेर पडलो नाही
तर तू कसं मला झेलशील?
आणि त्या डोळ्यांना पुन्हा कसं हसवशील


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Re: पाणी.....
PostPosted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 4:12 pm 
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kya baat hai...anshu bahar aaye aur unka ana hatheli me lena ..sab ek anuthi si kalpana

bhaut sunder ahsas likha hai

yuhi likhte rahna

ek kaam aur kar sako to karna sath me arth de diya karo takli aur bhi log jana sake apke anokhe se khayal ko..
aate rahna ok

sakhi


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Re: पाणी.....
PostPosted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 3:35 pm 
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ye to pani ke upar hai na.. :P

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Re: पाणी.....
PostPosted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 11:58 am 
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" Ek anuthi, adhbhut, or anupam kalpana,
kitne log aise hote hain jo is kalpana ko sakar swikar kar pate hain"
so nice of u,

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