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सृजन की पीड़ा
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 20, 2008 1:54 pm 
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सृजन की पीड़ा
प्रसूतिघर से आती आवाज़ें
दर्द से बिलखती नारी
अस्त व्यस्त बदहाल शरीर
ये सब देखकर एहसास हुआ की
सृजन भी कितना पीड़ादाई है
पर फिर भी ना जाने क्यों लोग
जलाते हैं बस्तियाँ, करते हैं विनाश
शायद वो नहीं हैं एक माँ
ना ही सही है उन्होने सृजन की पीड़ा |



prasootighar se aati awajen
dard se bilakhati nari
ast vyast badhaal sharir
ye sab dekhakar ehsas hua ki
srijan bhi kitna peedadayi hai
par phir bhi na jane kyon log
jalaate hain bastiyan, karte hain vinash
shayad vo nahin hain ek maan
na hi sahi hai unhone srijan ki peeda


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Re: सृजन की पीड़ा
PostPosted: Sat Dec 20, 2008 2:23 pm 
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sahi akha..log bastiya jala dete hai usme na jane kitne logo ko peeda hoti hai kisi ko apne ke jane ki kisi ko sab kuch nast hone ki...

unko peeda pata ho to kyu kare ye sab..
achi rachna


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Re: सृजन की पीड़ा
PostPosted: Sat Dec 20, 2008 2:59 pm 
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bahut samvedna hai isme

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Re: सृजन की पीड़ा
PostPosted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 9:13 am 
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:o hmmmm....gudy gudy

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Re: सृजन की पीड़ा
PostPosted: Thu Dec 25, 2008 12:38 am 
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bahut khub

dil ko choo gaya

sukriya


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PostPosted: Thu Dec 25, 2008 4:43 pm 
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dheerendra ji acha likha hai...bahut gahrayee hai


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Re: सृजन की पीड़ा
PostPosted: Thu Dec 25, 2008 9:08 pm 
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Kya khoob likha hai dheeru ji....


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Re: सृजन की पीड़ा
PostPosted: Mon Dec 29, 2008 11:08 pm 
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Really very painful & realistic. I appreciate it by my heart.


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Re: सृजन की पीड़ा
PostPosted: Wed Feb 11, 2009 2:13 pm 
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kyaa bat hai bhayee

acha sawaal hai ...

nice to read u after long time


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Re: सृजन की पीड़ा
PostPosted: Wed Feb 11, 2009 4:10 pm 
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