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Woh koun thi????.... ek kadwa sach
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 10:31 pm 
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WOH KOUN THI ????

Ektak shoonya mein niharati,,
Woh moun (silent) thi………
Moun si woh koun thi???????

Bayaan karti thi dukh uske,,,
Maathe per ubharati shikan ….
Mano ho chuki ast thi,,,,
Payal ki mangalmay chhanan….
Saraswati si sunder,abla ki swaroop,,,
Woh moun thi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Moun si woh koun thi????????

Komal kalika si uss abhagan se,,
Chahta tha poochna naam…..
Kalpit dooor se socha maine,,,,
Achha nahi huya anjaam…….
Shwet vastraon mein lipti,Sunder,shyamal,,,
woh moun thi……..
Moun si woh koun thi???????

Dard ka karndan karti,,
woh thi bahut majboor……..
Kalyugi hawa ke ikk jhonke ne,,
Ponch diya uska sindoor…….
Kuchle huye phool si, khushboo bikherati,,,,
Woh moun thi,,,,,,
Moun si woh koun thi?????????

:?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?:

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Re: Woh koun thi????.... ek kadwa sach
PostPosted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 11:01 pm 
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ehsaas_the feelings wrote:
WOH KOUN THI ????

Ektak shoonya mein niharati,,
Woh moun (silent) thi………
Moun si woh koun thi???????

Bayaan karti thi dukh uske,,,
Maathe per ubharati shikan ….
Mano ho chuki ast thi,,,,
Payal ki mangalmay chhanan….
Saraswati si sunder,abla ki swaroop,,,
Woh moun thi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Moun si woh koun thi????????

Komal kalika si uss abhagan se,,
Chahta tha poochna naam…..
Kalpit dooor se socha maine,,,,
Achha nahi huya anjaam…….
Shwet vastraon mein lipti,Sunder,shyamal,,,
woh moun thi……..
Moun si woh koun thi???????

Dard ka karndan karti,,
woh thi bahut majboor……..
Kalyugi hawa ke ikk jhonke ne,,
Ponch diya uska sindoor…….
Kuchle huye phool si, khushboo bikherati,,,,
Woh moun thi,,,,,,
Moun si woh koun thi?????????

:?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?:

kya baat ha jeet kamaal ki kalam ha kya kiha ha suparab


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Re: Woh koun thi????.... ek kadwa sach
PostPosted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 12:13 am 
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Dard ka karndan karti,,
woh thi bahut majboor……..
Kalyugi hawa ke ikk jhonke ne,,
Ponch diya uska sindoor…….
Kuchle huye phool si, khushboo bikherati,,,,
Woh moun thi,,,,,,
Moun si woh koun thi?????????

bahut dard aur mayoosi bhari rachna....datd ka ahsaas karati lagi

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Re: Woh koun thi????.... ek kadwa sach
PostPosted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 10:06 am 
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Vijay ji Superb !!!!

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Re: Woh koun thi????.... ek kadwa sach
PostPosted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 10:15 am 
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ehsaas_the feelings wrote:
WOH KOUN THI ????

Ektak shoonya mein niharati,,
Woh moun (silent) thi………
Moun si woh koun thi???????

Bayaan karti thi dukh uske,,,
Maathe per ubharati shikan ….
Mano ho chuki ast thi,,,,
Payal ki mangalmay chhanan….
Saraswati si sunder,abla ki swaroop,,,
Woh moun thi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Moun si woh koun thi????????

Komal kalika si uss abhagan se,,
Chahta tha poochna naam…..
Kalpit dooor se socha maine,,,,
Achha nahi huya anjaam…….
Shwet vastraon mein lipti,Sunder,shyamal,,,
woh moun thi……..
Moun si woh koun thi???????

Dard ka karndan karti,,
woh thi bahut majboor……..
Kalyugi hawa ke ikk jhonke ne,,
Ponch diya uska sindoor…….
Kuchle huye phool si, khushboo bikherati,,,,
Woh moun thi,,,,,,
Moun si woh koun thi?????????

:?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?:


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Re: Woh koun thi????.... ek kadwa sach
PostPosted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 9:50 pm 
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dbs wrote:
ehsaas_the feelings wrote:
WOH KOUN THI ????

Ektak shoonya mein niharati,,
Woh moun (silent) thi………
Moun si woh koun thi???????

Bayaan karti thi dukh uske,,,
Maathe per ubharati shikan ….
Mano ho chuki ast thi,,,,
Payal ki mangalmay chhanan….
Saraswati si sunder,abla ki swaroop,,,
Woh moun thi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Moun si woh koun thi????????

Komal kalika si uss abhagan se,,
Chahta tha poochna naam…..
Kalpit dooor se socha maine,,,,
Achha nahi huya anjaam…….
Shwet vastraon mein lipti,Sunder,shyamal,,,
woh moun thi……..
Moun si woh koun thi???????

Dard ka karndan karti,,
woh thi bahut majboor……..
Kalyugi hawa ke ikk jhonke ne,,
Ponch diya uska sindoor…….
Kuchle huye phool si, khushboo bikherati,,,,
Woh moun thi,,,,,,
Moun si woh koun thi?????????

:?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?: :?:

kya baat ha jeet kamaal ki kalam ha kya kiha ha suparab


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Re: Woh koun thi????.... ek kadwa sach
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bakhoobi apne ehsason ko bayan kiya hai.
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